The housing shortage in big cities can cause severe social consequences. Some people think only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
【段落示范】 【政府其他方式解决「房子少」】 1. Moreover, the effect of government action is much more extensive, as it can utilise its legislative and political powers, with which other parties are not equipped. * 针对“房子少”,提出其他政府的解决办法:颁布政策。这种权力是政府以外群体不具备的。
2. Corresponding policies can only be issued by the administration to target diverse circumstances. * 具体政策:多房征税。
3. For instance, additional tax can be imposed upon residents owning several houses so that they may sell or rent out vacant houses to reduce the budgets allocated to such extra bills. * 进一步解释:多房征税对缓解住房短缺问题的效果。
【解析】 1. 内容(Task Response)*** 特别重要 *** ? 见文中批注。
2. 组织(Coherence and Cohesion)*** 尤其重要 *** ? 见文中批注。
4. 语法(Grammatical Range and Accuracy) ? 第1句:主句为 the effect… is much more extensive + as引导的原因状语从句 + with which的定语从句 (原句为other parties are not equipped with legislative and political powers)
? 第3句:主句 + so that 引导的结果状语从句(allocated to 为v.ed非谓语作定语后置)