In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices, and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?
【段落示范】 【让步-节选2】 1. Besides, this policy can to some extent bring certain convenience to citizens, especially newcomers or those directionally-challenged ones, since it is much easier for them to navigate. * 好处2: 便利 - 对新来的人和“路痴”友好 [因果论证] 因为容易导航。
2. For instance, if one wants to do some shopping, the only thing he or she needs to do is to head directly towards the commercial district and then spend a few hours comparing goods and prices in shopping malls there. * 进一步解释好处2: [举例论证] 在一个区域内满足居民对应的需求,不用奔波。
【解析】 1. 内容(Task Response)*** 特别重要 *** ? 见文中批注。
2. 组织(Coherence and Cohesion)*** 尤其重要 *** ? 见文中批注。
4. 语法(Grammatical Range and Accuracy) ? 第1句:主句 + especially 引导的同位语作例证 + since 引导的原因状语从句 ? 第2句:if 引导的条件状语从句 + 主句(第一个and连接 head & spend这两个动词; 第二个and连接的是comparing的宾语:goods & prices)