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   雅思写作是中国考生们的一大头疼科目，也是难以提高的科目。新航道章跃老师分享小作文的地图3：“上帝”视角看计划性改变，希望能对即将要参加考试的烤鸭们有所帮助!

  【类型】地图(非数据型图表)

  【细分】改建(removal、replacements、additions)

  【写作视角】“上帝视角”。注意：题图题的主体部分有三种视角(对应三种写作思路)：1)上帝视角(即俯视，当成平面图写);2)访客视角(即进入建筑或场地内部，以访客视线，按照线路图写);3)混合视角(即前两种视角混合着用)。老章不常用纯粹的上帝视角写，这一篇从而值得注意学习这种视角的写法。

  # Introduction

  The two maps depict the planned changes of a university’s sports center based on its current conditions. With replacements and additions, this facility will have greater versatility.

  开头段，固定操作。说明图的主题，以及描述变化后的突出特点。

  # Body

  The entrance hall and the reception area will be expanded with a sports shop and a café in the west and east corners, while the central area of the premises will not change much, except that the gym will be extended eastward. The 25-meter swimming pool, the changing room and the seating zone will remain the way they are.

  主体部分第一段：按照图中箭头的指向，先描述一进门的区域的变化，从变化最大的部分开始，进而写到变化小或者没有变化的部分。

  Immense changes will be made on the outdoor courts, which are now independent of the central area. The west court will be removed, and as its replacement, a leisure pool and a changing room on its south will be built. The east court will also be replaced, and there will be a number of facilities where it is: the first is a sizeable sports hall that will share the wall with the seating area of the 25-meter pool; the second is a pair of dance studios that will be located directly opposite the sports hall; in addition, a changing room – adjacent to the café –will be built in the southeast corner.

  主体部分第二段：视线转向至东西方向的区域。与上一段的思路相同，先写变化大的地方后写变化小的地方。注意：需要通过一些连接词向考官展示写作的逻辑顺序。

  # Conclusion

  With the planned changes, the sports center will be more multi-functional.

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