新航道

  雅思写作是中国考生们的一大头疼科目，也是难以提高的科目。新航道 章跃老师分享小作文的地图 工业区改造，希望能对即将要参加考试的烤鸭们有所帮助!

  The naps below show an industriai area in the town of Norbiton, and pfannedfufure development of the site.

  summarlse the informatlon by seiecting and reporting the main features,andnake comparisons where relevant.

  Write at least 150 words.

  时间：现在 VS 将来

  不仅仅用【相对位置】为写作思路，还可以用【路线】为写作思路。

  用【路线】思路写作的时候，【起点】很重点。更重要的是要【设置一个访客】。

  变化多、东西多的时候，用【模糊写法】。

  【开头段】

  第1句话，介绍图的主题。

  第2句话，对图进行【宏观综述】。内容可以固定套路为【变化大不大】。

  1. Shown in the maps is a comparison between an industrial area’s present layout and a development plan for the future.

  2. Overall, the development will immensely change the area.

  【主体部分第1段】

  第1和2句，介绍工业区整体的相对位置，以及进入的路径。此时，还是用的“上帝视角”(俯瞰)。

  第3句开始，出现【访客】，开始【路线】写法。

  1. First, the area will remain east of the town and south of the farmland across the river.

  2. It will still be accessible via the road going in a west-east direction.

  3. A visitor will first reach a small roundabout, finding the initial change, and then see shops and a medical center – two additions, behind which will be the larger roundabout.

  【主体部分第2段】

  变化多、东西多的时候，用【模糊写法】，不需要特别具体。不是需要读者根据我们的作文把图画出来，而是我们的作文吻合图的样子。

  1. Reaching the larger roundabout, a changed view will immediately appear.

  2. All manufacturing plants will be removed.

  3. The roundabout will branch off to the northwest, and the branch will lead to two residential zones.

  4. Turing right, the plants alongside and at the end of the present branch road will all be gone and replaced with housing, a playground, and a school.

  5. In addition, the visitor will be able to go further in a northerly direction taking a new road extending across the river and will find another housing zone in the farming area.

  第1和4句，开头的地方是动词分词词组的“悬垂”现象，作为句子的状语。这种现象的用法很微妙。老章用到了，但是不要求大家使用，大家可用状语从句替代。

  词汇当然值得注意，要学会。

  【结尾段】

  可有可无(在开头段已经有了对于图的【宏观综述】的情况下)。

  All in all, the change will be remarkable.