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  表格 三家医院的满意度 – 2021.03.04真题

  The table below gives information about the patients’ evaluation of three hospitals in four different aspects.

  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

  * 数据图：【表格】

  * 此图为【同时不同项】：比较关系存在于横向四个不同方面间，也存在于纵向三家医院间。

  【开头段】

  Shown in the table is patients’ satisfaction with three hospitals from four different aspects.

  ● 第一句开头的【倒装】。注意动词的单复数由倒置后的主语决定。

  【主体部分第1段】

  写主体段前，先对表格信息进行分组：找异同点。观察可发现，前两列三家医院的数据存在差距，而后两列的数据相对平衡。

  In terms of service aftercare and treating, the evaluation of patients in three hospitals approximatedto each other. 总——分，递进 The former aspect is notable: there was a minute gap among the percentages, whose range was between 70% and 83%. Likewise, the discrepancy regarding the latter aspect was a bit wider, [独立主格] with the rates varying from 68% to 85%.

  ● 第一句和后面的句子是【总——分】和【递进】关系。

  ● 【注意以下 常见单词不常见的词义】

  ● approximate to vi. 接近，近似

  ● minute adj. 极小的

  【主体部分第2段】写表格中的其它数值。

  By stark contrast, there was a disparity among the assessment of three hospitals in two remaining aspects. The hospital staff won the approval of about three quarters of patients in hospital A and over four fifths in hospital C, while merely less than two fifths of patients were content with hospital B’s workers. Similarly, almost all the patients in hospital C were satisfied with the waiting time, while two remainders only contented nearly a half of their patients.

  ● 段与段之间的衔接也要做好

  ● 注意【现象描述】的写法，而不是单纯罗列数据

  ● 注意【程度副词的使用】

  ● disparity n.[C] 不同;悬殊(自带huge的程度)

  【结尾段】

  Overall, hospital C received the best evaluation, while the two remainders were less satisfactory.