支招小作文(129) | 地图题 学院设施的变化
2023/8/17 15:27:23来源:新航道作者:新航道
摘要:支招小作文(129) | 地图题 学院设施的变化
支招小作文(129) | 地图题 学院设施的变化
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The maps below show the future plan about the Biology School in a particular university.
类型:地图题——变迁类
写作注意点:分段、时态、方位的描述、变迁的描述
The two maps illustrate changes that will take place in the overall layout of a particular school in one university.
【开头段:概括地图主要内容。通过同义替换改写题目。】
In general, more facilities will be added on campus, replacing some existing green areas today.
【总结段:也可写在结尾。总结两幅地图中范围最大或最明显的变化。概括地图中什么设施多了,什么设施少了。】
Some changes are going to be made in the northern part of the area. Although the Indoor Sports Hall at the northeast corner will stay untouched, the original forest will be replaced by two constructions designed for lab and office respectively, with some trees surrounding them.
【主体段1:两幅地图中北部地区的变化。结构:分论点+变迁。其中变迁可以按照“主体+动作+位置+结果”来写,并用衔接手段连接两个变迁。】
The central area of the campus is expected to be largely unchanged. The central library with a southbound curve road running beside will still take up major space. In addition, the Drama Center to the east of the library will be converted into a Music Center, while still remaining at the original position.
【主体段2:两幅地图中中部地区的变化。】
Great modifications will occur in the south, where more teaching buildings and lecture rooms will be established, with paths connecting them inbetween. Another change is that a large car park for staff can be found at the south end of the road, removing some trees. The cafe and IT center will be kept in their original locations although the latter will be enlarged.
【主体段3:两幅地图中南部地区的变化。】
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