支招小作文（141） | 静态表 五个国家移民数量
2023/11/21 14:31:22来源：新航道作者：新航道
摘要：支招小作文（141） | 静态表 五个国家移民数量
支招小作文（141） | 静态表 五个国家移民数量
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2023-5-9 大陆】 The table below shows the number of immigrants from five different countries to these five countries in 2002.
*表格中数字代表的是million
【开头段】
The table compares Britain, Germany, Poland, Italy and Spain in terms of the number of immigrants that they received from these five countries in the year 2002.
【概述段】
Overall, compared with people from other four countries, more Polish people decided to live abroad. Also, UK enjoyed the greatest popularity among these five countries.
【Body 1】
It is clear that compared with other countries, UK and Germany attracted more immigrants. To be more specific, 8.9 million Polish people migrated to UK, which was roughly twice the figure for Italian and Spanish emigrants. However, UK only attracted 2.3 million Germans. Meanwhile, Germany attracted 0.8 million people from UK, making it the most popular destination of settlement for British immigrants.Besides, the numbers of emigrants from the other three countries who decided to settle in Germany were all larger than 3 million.
【思路解析】本段描述接受移民最多的UK和Germany，2个国家内部重点数据对比。
*语言点提示：采用生活化表达方式 而不是机械描述数据信息
【Body 2】
We can also find that Poland did not enjoy much popularity among emigrants from the other four countries, with the figures ranging from 0.1 million to 0.5 million. Italy and Spain were chosen by roughly the same number of immigrants from UK, with the figure of around 0.5 million. Likewise, Germany people who migrated to Italy and Spain had a similar figure, at roughly 0.6 million.
【思路解析】本段描述剩余3个国家的数据对比。移民到Poland的人最少，从UK、Germany移民到Spain和Italy的人数相似。
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