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  今天，上海新航道培训学校雅思小编给大家带来了2017.6.17雅思考试里的雅思写作大作文真题范文及解析，希望对各位考生们的备考有所帮助。

  雅思写作大作文题目：

  Some people think a country benefits from a large proportion of young people university educated, but others think sending young people to universities only leads to graduate unemployment. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  雅思写作大作文范文：

  Nowadays, the general trend seems to be that more and more young people go to college and receive higher education. In china alone, for example, about 7 million out of 9.4 million high school students were accepted by universities in 2014, while only 35 years ago, only 5% high school students went to college. This rapid increase of the number of university students, though supported by almost all governments throughout the world, has given rise to doubts among some people who insist that there is close interrelationship between the large number of university graduates and the high unemployment rate.

  Obviously, as more people have access to university education, the entire country will benefit from it. For one thing, the country will be equipped with a workforce of higher quality. The specialised training these people receive at universities can help people in the country in many ways. With better doctors, people can enjoy longer lives; with more professional architects, people can live more comfortably and safely; with more skilled horticulturists, people can live in a more beautiful environment. Additionally, if universities are open to more high school students, they will face less intense academic pressure. As a result, these students can enjoy more freedom to learn things that really interest them and so they can learn them better as interest is always the best teacher.

  There are many people, however, who would link the rise of unemployment rate to the increased number of university graduates. In their viewpoint, as more and more young graduates pour into the job market, to get a job has become increasingly difficult. For example, here in China, a teaching position was rather easy to obtain 20 years ago, but now the position is open only to those with a M.A., or even Ph.D. Degree.

  To my mind, it is certainly a good thing to have more people receive university education since this can upgrade the overall quality of the workforce in a country. Meanwhile, more university graduates do not naturally lead to more people losing their job. More university graduates will indeed make the competition for well-paid jobs more intense, yet they do not reduce the number ofavailable jobs. This means some university graduates will have to do the jobs originally held by less educated people. This is not bad, since all jobs, well-paid or not, will be done by more qualified people.

  解析：

  1. 开头引出大学生数目增加的话题，并指出有人认为这和高失业率相关。以中国的数据为例，所以“考鸭”们平时可以多留意和收集一些这样的数据，使文章更加详实。

  2. give rise to doubts (among) 在…中引起质疑

  3. there is close interrelationship between (…and…) 在…和…之间有紧密的相互关系。

  4. 第二段从两个方面论证大学教育普及的好处：其一是劳动力的质量会提高(以医生、建筑师、园艺家为例，三个句子结构整齐，烤鸭们可以试着模仿这样的写法。其二是大学扩招减轻了高中生的学习压力，从而将经历投入到真正感兴趣的事情上，更有所成。两个原因分别由for one thing(原因之一是)和additionally(此外)来衔接。

  5. obviously明显地，相当于it is obvious that…

  6. be equipped with 装备有…

  7. 第三段阐述另一派的观点：高失业率和大学毕业生人数增加相关。其逻辑是越来越多的大学毕业生流入就业市场—找工作变得更困难—以教师职位的学历要求举例论证。

  8. however表示转折，插入there are…who…这个定语从句中间，使句子结构更平衡;link sth. to. sth. 将什么与什么联系以来，把什么归因于什么，相当于relate sth. to sth./attribute sth. to sth.

  9. in one’s viewpoint 在某人看来，用来代替they think…表达是不是更为高级呢?也可用in one’s point of view/in one’s opinion等。

  10. increasingly相当于more and more或gradually。

  11. sth. is easy to obtain 某事容易获得，obtain可以用来替代get等简单词汇。

  12. 最后一段阐明自己的观点：认为大学生人数增加是好事，其逻辑是劳动力的总体素质会提高—大学毕业生增加并非人们失业的直接原因—虽然竞争更激励但他们并不减少工作岗位—大学生可以从事原先由没受过什么教育的人从事的工作—这样，所有工作都由更能胜任它的人承担。

  13. To my mind 在我看来

  14. certainly=definitely=of course 当然，必然

  15. upgrade the overall quality of the workforce 提升劳动力的整体素质

  16. intense 激烈的，严重的

  17. available 空闲的，可寻求的

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