2021年3月4日雅思考试写作task1作文范文及解析
2021/12/14 14:07:49来源：新航道作者：新航道
摘要：每场雅思考试之后，新航道上海学校雅思频道小编会第一时间分享雅思考试小作文范文及解析，希望对各位备考考生们有所帮助，对雅思写作有所提高!本文是3月4日雅思小作文范文及解析。
每场雅思考试之后，新航道上海学校雅思频道小编会第一时间分享雅思考试小作文范文及解析，希望对各位备考考生们有所帮助，对雅思写作有所提高!本文是3月4日雅思小作文范文及解析。
参考范文及解析∶
The table gives information about patient satisfaction in three different hospitals towards four aspects，namely， hospital staff， waiting time， treating and service aftercare.【对题目的 patient saying …. good 进行改述，避免重复，也同时避免累赘】
Overall, the patients surveyed were most satisfied with services provided by Hospital C,as opposed to HospitalA， who received the least praise 【对题目的改述】.【总览段的内容不建议出现具体数值;根据静态图的写法，选择数值最多和最少的两项进行概括即可】
Out of the four aspects,all these three hospitals had a good performance in treating and service aftercare 【分段依据∶将表格中相似的数据归在一段描述】.In particular【和上一句构成总分结构】，HospitalA received the highest satisfaction ratings,at85% and 83% respectively, only 1% higher than Hospital C，but exceeding Hospital B by 17% in treating and 13% in another【通过项目之间的对比来实现句式精简化，同时实现句式多样性】.
Intems of waiting time and hospitalLstaff.【分段依据∶将表格中差异较大的数据归在一段描述】，however【语法现象∶插入语】，the gap in patient satisfaction was particularly large among these three hospitals，among which【通过抛出定语从句，可以引出数值最大或最小的项目】Hospital C accounted for the largest proportions(81% and 92%)，neary twice as much as 【通过比较结构简化写作内容】those of Hospital B(38% and 53%).While 【通过让步状语从句来凸显数值间的差异】】the staff in Hospital A was wel-performed 【对题目的改述】and received praises from 74%of the patients， its waiting time seemed intolerable 【对题目的改述】for almost half of the patients sunveyed.
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