欢迎来到上海新航道学校官网!英语高能高分,就上新航道

上海学校

  • 课程
  • 资讯

4008-125-888

2021年12月11日雅思大作文范文及解析:个人是否能够解决环境问题?

2021/12/14 14:18:48来源:新航道作者:新航道

摘要:新航道上海学校雅思频道小编第一时间带来分享每次雅思考试大作文范文及解析,希望对各位备考考生们有所帮助,对雅思写作有所提高!本文是2021年12月11日雅思大作文范文及解析:个人是否能够解决环境问题?

  新航道上海学校雅思频小编第一时间带来分享每次雅思考试大作文范文及解析,希望对各位备考考生们有所帮助,对雅思写作有所提高!本文是2021年12月11日雅思大作文范文及解析:个人是否能够解决环境问题?


 2021年12月11日雅思大作文题目

  Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take action. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.


 高分范文及解析

  Introduction

  Are environmental problems so big that individuals cannot make any contributions to resolving them? The answer is absolutely “No”. Instead, the issues cannot be addressed without individuals’ joint efforts.

  解析

  老题重现,站others。经典环境类话题,相关话题还有:

  ①Government are more capable than individuals in protecting the environment. Agree?

  ② Some people argue that individuals can do something to save the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  ③ Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  joint adj. 联合的;共同的

 Body 1

  Admittedly, it is justifiable for some to advocate that individuals can do little, since solving environmental problems, as a global issue, requires nations, organisations, companies, and individuals to get involved. Compared with average people, who can merely persuade others to follow the rules and norms, the governing authority possesses the legislative power to enact strict laws, issue corresponding policies, and effectively enforce them in order to safeguard the environment. For example, heavy fines can deter both institutions and individuals to behave properly. In comparison, individuals are not empowered to require others to do so.// However, what average people do cannot be ignored.

  解析

  让步:解决环境问题涉及广泛,需要各个群体加入,而个人所能做的事情在政府面前确实较小,因为没有政府的立法权和执法权。// 反驳:个人所作所为不可忽视

  norm n. 规范;准则

  legislative adj. 立法的

  enact vt. 制定(法律)

  enforce vt. 实施,使生效

  safeguard vt. 保护

  deter vt. 威慑

  empower vt. 授权〔某人或某组织做某事〕

  Body 2

  As a matter of fact, only when average citizens take certain actions will the effects brought by laws and rules be maximised. To illustrate, even though heavy fines can serve as a deterrent, people may comply with the minimum environmental requirements set out by law owing to either the absence of a sense of responsibility as being qualified planet-mates or the failure to compromise with their convenient lives which are partly based on the sacrifice of natural resources. In this case, the aforementioned laws and rules cannot be as effectual as expected. For example, charging for vehicle taxes may reduce the usage of private cars to some extent, while big differences can be made if the owners leave their cars in the garage voluntarily.

  解析

  立论:政府政策实施需民众配合,否则收效甚微

  deterrent n. 威慑物

  comply with vi. 服从;遵守

  compromise vi. 妥协;让步

  effectual adj. 奏效的


 04

  In a nutshell, though the government have greater capability in coping with environmental problems by enacting relevant laws and rules, they are not as effective as expected without endeavours of individual citizens.

  解析

  【解析】重申观点

  endeavour n. 尝试;努力


  以上就是12.11日雅思考试写作task2的范文及解析,更多雅思写作范文,请关注新航道雅思频道

请加新航道老师(微信号:shnc_2018

百人留学备考群,名师答疑,助教监督,分享最新资讯,领取独家资料。扫码免费加入

免费获取资料

热报课程

  • 雅思课程
班级名称 班号 开课时间 人数 学费 报名
词汇语法班(A段) VGXHX240512 2024/5/12 0:00:00 6-10人 ¥8800.00 在线咨询

免责声明
1、如转载本网原创文章,情表明出处
2、本网转载媒体稿件旨在传播更多有益信息,并不代表同意该观点,本网不承担稿件侵权行为的连带责任;
3、如本网转载稿、资料分享涉及版权等问题,请作者见稿后速与新航道联系(电话:021-64380066),我们会第一时间删除。

制作:每每

旗舰校区:上海徐汇区文定路209号宝地文定商务中心1楼 乘车路线:地铁1/4号线上海体育馆、3/9号线宜山路站、11号线上海游泳馆站

电话:4008-125-888

版权所有:上海胡雅思投资管理有限公司 沪ICP备11042568号-1