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  * 柱+表，选自2021.3.6笔试真题回忆

  Writing Task 1:

  You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

  The chart below shows the numbers of registered road vehicles in use in a European country.

  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

  Write at least 150 words.

  阅读提示：

  * 数据图：【柱图】+【表格】

  * 柱图涉及时间变化，为“两时间点”题型，重点在项目间、两个年份间数据的“比较”。

  * 【两时间点】的题型，不存在明显的线性关系，不宜出现“趋势”的表述，建议采用趋势词的名词形式。

  * 【表格】部分为“变化的百分比”，建议融合进柱图描述。

  【开头段】

  Shown in the bar chart and the table are the number of five categories of registered vehicles in 1996 and 2006, and the percentage change of each category over the same time.

  【主体部分第1段】上升种类

  Private cars and other types were the two leading categories, both witnessing an increase in the number. Specifically, the former stood out, as it dominated in automobile industry, with more or less 20 million. Though there were merely over 1 million other types of vehicles registered, the number experienced a greater increase than the former one did, 58% compared with 24%.

  【主体部分第2段】其他种类

  By stark contrast, the scenarios regarding the remainders were rather different. The following two categories - motorcycles and lorries – were roughly 0.6 million fewer than other types, and their numbers both showed a fall, with the decrease rate of the former (40%) twice larger than that of the latter (20%). Lastly, it is noteworthy that the decade saw no change in bus, coach, and taxi, whose number ranked the last, with 0.1 million in both years.

  本图分组比较容易，可以按变化分组。

  主语的多样性，可保证句式重复度降低。

  the former, the latter也可作为一种指代方式，满足CC的得分。

  第一个划线处句法结构：让步状语从句+主句+独立主格

  第二个划线处句法结构：句1(主系表，中间通过短破折插入two categories的同位语)+ and连接句2(主谓宾)+with引导的独立主格

  【结尾段】

  Overall, the number of registered private cars far dwarfed that of other categories in both years.

  dwarf vt. (相比之下)使显得矮小，使相形见绌

  结尾段特征，可以无视之前的分组依据，再纵观全图，看特征。

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