欢迎来到上海新航道学校官网!英语高能高分,就上新航道

上海学校

  • 课程
  • 资讯

4008-125-888

2022年6月25日雅思大作文范文及解析:偏远地区开发能源的利弊

2022/6/29 16:36:46来源:新航道作者:新航道

摘要:新航道上海学校雅思频道小编第一时间带来分享每次雅思考试大作文范文及解析,希望对各位备考考生们有所帮助,对雅思写作有所提高!本文是2022年6月25日雅思大作文范文及解析:偏远地区开发能源的利弊。

  新航道上海学校雅思频道小编第一时间带来分享每次雅思考试大作文范文及解析,希望对各位备考考生们有所帮助,对雅思写作有所提高!本文是2022年6月25日雅思大作文范文及解析:偏远地区开发能源的利弊。


  2022年6月25日雅思大作文题目

  With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such places?


  高分范文及解析

  Introduction

  Beset by the issue of energy scarcity, people now tend to search for fossil fuels in untapped regions; otherwise, they may be confronted with a sluggish economic growth. Therefore, I personally regard such an approach as reasonable and feasible.

  解析

  2014年的老题,常规环境类话题。审题注意:disadvantages已经限定了,只能写对这些未开发地区的环境破坏来讲。相关话题:Natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?

  beset vt. 困扰

  scarcity n. 稀缺

  sluggish adj. 缓慢的

  Body 1

  Admittedly, such practice may trigger several repercussions on the natural environment. The most conspicuous one is that it may pose a threat to the local wildlife. This is mainly because an enormous number of industrial facilities will be in use during the process of tapping those remote regions, which may be very likely to wreak havoc on the natural habitats, impacting the air and soil quality and thus rendering the wild animals in jeopardy.// However, behind those problems are a silver lining, which indicates that such hazards can be avoided as long as strict regulation and law about energy exploitation are implemented.

  解析

  让步(开发能源对当地环境的坏处):大量工业设施使用 → 空气、土地质量受影响 → 对当地生态有害// 反驳:只要管理到位

  trigger vt. 触发

  repercussion n. (不好的)影响

  conspicuous adj. 明显的

  wreak havoc on sth. 对…造成破坏

  in jeopardy 处于危险之中

  implement vt. 实施


 Body 2

  As a matter of fact, such practice can bring more benefits in various aspects, especially in economic growth. For one thing, as the newly-tapped energy can directly alleviate the energy shortage, which will to some extent guarantee a country’s industrialisation a promising prospect, both economic and technology development will be spurred, offering better prerequisites to resolving environment crisis by exploring new alternatives. In contrast, the lack of feasible approaches to energy scarcity will undoubtedly bring both economic growth and technology advancement to a standstill.// For another, the locals in remote areas can also be benefitted, as such a policy must provide them with more job opportunities, by which their life quality will be bettered.

  解析

  反驳:(1)开发能源 → 满足能有需求 → 保证经济发展 → 有资金探索新能源替换,长远看,某种程度上弥补之前可能带来的环境破破坏;(2)偏远地区更多工作机会

  alleviate vt. 缓解

  spur vt. 刺激;促进

  prerequisite n. 先决条件

  bring sth. to a standstill静止(状态); 停顿,停滞


  Conclusion

  In the light of the above, the final verdict is quite crystal-clear. Environment problems as such a trend may cause, the disadvantages of tapping untouched regions for energy pale into insignificance when set against the advantages.

  解析

  重申观点

  verdict n. 意见;结论

  pale into insignificance 使显得不那么重要;使相形见绌

请加新航道老师(微信号:shnc_2018

百人留学备考群,名师答疑,助教监督,分享最新资讯,领取独家资料。扫码免费加入

免费获取资料

热报课程

  • 雅思课程
班级名称 班号 开课时间 人数 学费 报名
词汇语法班(A段) VGYPX240330 2024/3/30 0:00:00 6-10人 ¥8800.00 在线咨询

免责声明
1、如转载本网原创文章,情表明出处
2、本网转载媒体稿件旨在传播更多有益信息,并不代表同意该观点,本网不承担稿件侵权行为的连带责任;
3、如本网转载稿、资料分享涉及版权等问题,请作者见稿后速与新航道联系(电话:021-64380066),我们会第一时间删除。

制作:每每

旗舰校区:上海徐汇区文定路209号宝地文定商务中心1楼 乘车路线:地铁1/4号线上海体育馆、3/9号线宜山路站、11号线上海游泳馆站

电话:4008-125-888

版权所有:上海胡雅思投资管理有限公司 沪ICP备11042568号-1