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  2022年8月27日雅思大作文题目

  Some people think that the government should ban dangerous sports, but others think that people should have freedom to do whatever sport activities they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  高分范文及解析

  Introduction

  While some argue that the authority should prohibit its citizens from partaking the sports that may render them severely injured, I entertain the view that people ought to have the freedom to decide what kind of sports they can opt for when the danger of such sports can actually be manageable.

  解析

  体育相关的双边讨论。两边都带should，可讨论原因，也可讨论利弊。相关话题：Extreme sports such as skydiving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  prohibit (sb. from doing sth.) vt. 禁止某人做某事

  partake vt. 参加

  render vt. 使

  entertain vt. 持有，怀有

  opt for vi. 选择

  manageable adj. 可处理的;易操作的

  Body 1

  It is justifiable for some to oppose dangerous activities like extreme sports. This is mainly because such sports challenge people’s physiological limits, with great safety risks underlying. Once accidents pop up, partakers will be under threat of injury or even death. In other words, dangerous sports are more likely to injure athletes than common sports, as they require extreme demands for strength, resilience, and adaptability to the risky environment. For instance, rock-climbers are prone to fatal falls, while runners may merely sprain their ankles. Considering the danger of such activities, the government should take actions to prevent its citizens from putting their lives at risk. // However, such detriments can actually be minimized. As participants undergo professional training and take full precautions, the risks have been reduced to extremely low.

  解析

  让步-禁止：挑战人的生理极限，存在安全隐患，甚至威胁生命 à 政府禁止可以保障基本安全// 反驳：保持警惕，采取有效的措施，可以降低风险

  physiological adj. 生理的

  pop up vi. 突然出现

  be under treat of 受到…的威胁

  resilience n.[U] 适应能力

  fatal fall n. 致命的坠落

  sprain vt. 扭伤

  put…at risk vt. 把…置于危险中

  precaution n.[C] 预防措施

  Body 2

  However, such an injunction is highly likely to be a nanny-state regulation, as it develops into excessive governing and thus violates people’s liberty. As a matter of fact, most adult citizens are aware of what they are doing as well as of the consequences of participating in such dangerous activities. They may appreciate the good intent behind this ban but get annoyed by the excessive interference. As there are diverse talents and hobbies for each person in the sports, the preference of different groups should be respected. Additionally, such activities can inspire unlimited potential and explosive power, hone people’s will, and allow participants to constantly break through themselves. Risktakers ought to have the freedom to enjoy the sense of exhilaration and fulfilment.

  解析

  立论-有自由：(1)尊重个体的爱好自由与差异，同时也要相信，人们出于对自己生命的珍惜，会做好相应的措施规避风险;(2)危险运动比常规运动更激发潜力，磨练意志，培养突破自我的能力

  injunction n.[C] 禁制令

  nanny-state n. 保姆政府

  interference n. 干涉

  hone vt. 磨练

  exhilaration n. 兴奋

  Conclusion

  In a nutshell, risky though dangerous sports seem, people should have the freedom to opt for the sports they are fond of, especially when the underlying danger can be manageable.

  解析

  重申观点