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支招小作文（139） | 混合数据图

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[2023/ 4/ 22] The table and pie charts below show the proportion of local and non-local students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2009.

开头段：
The table and pie charts illustrate changes in the figures for domestic and international students studying in Australian universities for the year 2001 and 2009.

概述段：
Overall, the 9-year period witnessed a significant rise in the total number of Australian university students. Also, there were more local students than foreign students in both years.

【思路要点】：
- university students的总人数上升。
- Local人数在2年内都超过non-local人数。

主体段
思路1：按照图分段 （本篇文章采用此种分段思路）
Body 1：表格信息描述
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that the total number of university students in Australia witnessed a noticeable rise from 33000 in 2001 to 39000 in 2009. More specifically, in the initial year, there were 28300 local students, which was almost 7 times the figure for their non-local counterparts. Afterwards, there emerged a significant decline in the figure for domestic students to 27300 in 2009, while the number of international students more than doubled to 11700.

【思路要点】：
- Australian university 总人数从33000显著上升到39000.
- local总数从2001年的28300下降到 2009年的27300，占比下降了16%。
- 对比而言，non-local总人数翻了2倍多，到2009年达到11700。

Body2：饼图--local students
From the first pie chart, it is manifest that in the original year, 86% of all the college students were local ones, 46% of whom were females. Subsequently, the figure for female local students only dropped slightly by 6% in the following 8 years, where as a noticeable drop could be found in the percentage of males from 40% to 30%.

【思路要点】：
- 2001年local占比86%，46%是female。
- female轻微下降了6%，但males从40%显著下降到30%。

Body 3：饼图--non-local students
As for international students, there were 14% of all the students who came from abroad in the year 2001, consisting of 9% males and 5% females. After 8 years, there were almost no changes to the former figure. However, the proportion of non-local females was on a sharp climb, reaching 20% in 2009. As a result, females outnumbered their male counterparts in the end of the given period.

【思路要点】：
- 2001年non-local占比14%，包含9%的males和5%的females
- 2009年，male占比几乎不变。但是，female占比急剧上涨到20%
- female在这一年占比反超male

主体段思路2：按照时间分段 （整合表格、饼图信息综合对比。）
Body 1：2001年
- 学生总人数33000
- 86%是local，男女占比相似
- 4700人是non-local，male占比(9%)大约是female的2倍

Body 2：2009年
- 总人数显著上升到39000
- non- local人数急剧上升了16%，到达11700
-其中，non-local females在这一年比例超过non-local males的比例
- local人数显著下降到27300
- 其中，females的比例轻微下降了6%，但是males的比例显著下降到30%.

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