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  上海新航道名师独家解析-2016年8月27日雅思写作大作文范文及解析

  8月27日雅思写作大作文题目：

  Some people think it is more important to plant trees in open areas in towns and cities than to provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  8月27日雅思写作范文：第一段

  Many people suggest that there should be more trees rather than houses in the open areas of cities and towns. While this suggestion is reasonable in many cases, it is not so in others.

  8月27日雅思写作范文解析：

  开头段，直接重述题目观点，然后给出自己的观点。注意体会唐老师如何对题目进行重新表述。在雅思考试中，如果全文照抄题目原话，容易给考官一个印象，认为你不具备改写能力。

  while 这个词尤其灵活，请各位烤鸭务必掌握其细微的用法。

  8月27日雅思写作范文：第二段

  For a city or town which has already had sufficient supply of housing, planting trees in the open areas is certainly a good idea.With green trees covering the streets, the city look much more beautiful. That is why I prefer living in southern cities where green trees are everywhere even in winter to living in northern cities. At the same time, more trees make the city air cleaner, because as we all know, trees take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen, which is beneficial to the health of the city dwellers.Statistics show that people living in a tree-covered city enjoy much higher life expectancy than those living within the concrete walls of tall buildings.

  8月27日雅思写作范文解析：

  本段讲种树在什么情况下是合理的，以及为什么要种树。这里提出了两个理由：一，种树可以让城镇更美丽;二，种树可以使人们身体更健康。

  With green trees covering the streets = if green trees cover the streets = if the streets are covered by green trees. 这是一种很地道的独立结构，这里用来替换过度使用的if从句。练习用with引导的独立结构，可以丰富我们的句式。

  Statistics show that...统计数据表明......

  8月27日雅思写作范文：第三段

  Yet, it would be stupid to ask people to plant trees in a city or town where they can not find enough houses to live in. Planting trees is undoubtedly more environmentally friendly, but getting a shelter to keep off rain and snow is always the top concern for all people. 30 years ago, in many cities and towns in China, for example, many houses were built as the urbanisation attracted a large number of people into the city. People did not focus on planting trees back then, not that they did not understand the importance of a healthy environment, but that they found they should put survival at the top of their agenda.

  8月27日雅思写作范文解析：

  本段讲在某些情况下，比如当城镇居民无楼可住的时候，种树并不是人们的最佳选择。然后用中国30年的情况作为例证。

  ...not that..., but that... 不是因为，而是因为

  Put...at the top of agenda 把......置于议程之首;最先考虑......

  8月27日雅思写作范文：第四段

  There is no definite answer, therefore, to the question whether we should plant trees or build houses in the open areas of a city, because the answer is dependent on how developed the city is. In a highly developed city, planting trees is always a better choice, yet in a less developed city, houses are more needed than trees.

  8月27日雅思写作范文解析：

  结论段：到底该种树还是建房取决于城市的发展程度。在结论段，我们也要避免与前面部分表达重复。

  ... Is dependent on... = depend on... 取决于......

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