欢迎来到上海新航道学校官网!英语高能高分,就上新航道

上海学校

  • 课程
  • 资讯

4008-125-888

2019年12月SAT考试,写作“磨枪抱脚”之一二技(二)

2019/12/5 14:11:01来源:互联网作者:上海新航道

摘要:新航道SAT小编带来了关于面对2019年12月SAT考试,写作“磨枪抱脚”之一二技(二)。

  新航道SAT小编带来了关于面对2019年12月SAT考试,写作“磨枪抱脚”之一二技(二)。


  「Reading Passage 1」


  SAT北美考区2016年11月写作真题

  Bad for the Birds, Bad for All of Us


 写作范文

  以我们的作文的(主体部分的)第一个段落(应对材料文的第一、二段)为例,主要学习两个关键写作内容:

  ● 对于材料文内容的Summary(文中红色部分)

  ● 对于材料文写作的Analysis(文中蓝色部分)

  The essay begins with a rather straightforward statement that America’s declining bird populations are an early warning of much bigger ecosystem disruptions that would be consequential to the whole country. Warned by the decline, the author then points out that America should make more efforts to protect the habitats of birds—America’s farms and ranches. At this point, the author uses a technique—personification: the call for help and protection, as “(the birds)’re telling us that we need to do more. Paragraph Two specifies about the population plunge by naming two species, Eastern Meadowlark and Henslow’s Sparrow, which have suffered immense diminishing populations. The slumps are well substantiated by the alarming statistical facts as indisputable evidence.

  小总结:

  在我们的作文里Analysis的内容篇幅不一定就是要多于Summary,全看材料文是什么样的了。


  再以我们的作文的(主体部分的)第二个段落(应对材料文的第三、四、五、六、七、八段)为例:

  ● 对于材料文内容的Summary(文中红色部分)

  ● 对于材料文写作的Analysis(文中蓝色部分)

  The author remains optimistic in the face of the ecological adversity, as he sees “bright spots”. He points out that the rebounding local sub-population, exemplified by the tremendous growth in the Henslow’s Sparrows’ population, is credited to Conservation Reserve Program (CRP), and, by quoting a report and using diverse statistics—percentages, sizes and numbers, the author then recognizes the many other remarkable achievements of the farm bill CRP, such as encouraging landowners to adopt sustainable farming and breeding and expanding bird habitat. However, there is a turning of the situation, as the authors says the “gains are at risk” in the single-sentence Paragraph 6. Through the transition, the author moves to the crisis the farm bill faces, which are the political divergence and the political powers’ financial act that will lead to the serious shrinkage of conservation reserve lands.

  小总结:

 1)我们的作文虽然可能覆盖材料文的多个段落和极大篇幅,但是我们自己的作文的篇幅不一样就对应的很长。

  2)我们自己的作文在分析的时候,可能分析作者的态度(remains optimistic)、论证方式(exemplify,quoting a report and using diverse statistics)、材料文的结构和脉络 (a turning of the situation, the transition, moves to)。

  以我们的作文的(主体部分的)第三个段落(应对材料文的第九、十、十一、十二段)为例:

  ● 对于材料文内容的Summary(文中红色部分)

  ● 对于材料文写作的Analysis(文中蓝色部分)

  As is stated clearly, the influence of CRPs extends beyond the benefits for birds and to agriculture, as many CRPs promote and pay for the transitioning to sustainable agriculture. The author uses an example that water is cleansed and purified in which specific numbers are given to illustrate the benefit. Immediately, the author points out the current wide coverage of CRPs is however inadequate, since there are still a number of problems—the case of the plantings in the Corn Belt and the dreadful depletion of oxygen in the waters of the Gulf of Mexico as examples. Further, it is suggested that the 2013 farm bill plays a pivotal role in the existence of reserve programs of other types of lands and decides the federal government’s longtime dedication to farmland conservation. In Paragraph 12, it is suggested that the farm bill is much needed by American farms, and the high popularity of the bill is illustrated by the case that new landowner sign-ups for the funding typically exceed the governmental quota.

  小总结:

  我们自己的作文在分析的时候,会遇到一些模棱两可的界于summary和analysis之间的内容(黄色高亮部分),这一部分内容不是纯粹的材料文的内容概要,但也不是我们从读者的角度作出的外部分析,而是一种“解读:穿透材料文作者的字面意思,去理解作者的潜台词和暗示”。

请加COCO老师(微信号:shnc_2018

百人留学备考群,名师答疑,助教监督,分享最新资讯,领取独家资料。扫码免费加入

免费获取资料

免责声明
1、如转载本网原创文章,情表明出处
2、本网转载媒体稿件旨在传播更多有益信息,并不代表同意该观点,本网不承担稿件侵权行为的连带责任;
3、如本网转载稿、资料分享涉及版权等问题,请作者见稿后速与新航道联系(电话:021-64380066),我们会第一时间删除。

热报课程

  • SAT课程
班级名称 班号 开课时间 人数 学费 报名
SAT冲刺铂金班(争1500分)走读/住宿 SATCCXH210515 2021/5/15 0:00:00 3-6人 ¥11800.00 在线咨询
SAT学霸班(冲刺1500分+) SATXBXH210516 2021/5/16 0:00:00 3-6人 ¥11800.00 在线咨询
SAT基础铂金班(争1400分) SATJCXH210515 2021/5/15 0:00:00 3-6人 ¥20800.00 在线咨询
SAT强化铂金班(争1450分)走读/住宿 SATQHXH210515 2021/5/15 0:00:00 3-6人 ¥21800.00 在线咨询
SAT预备班(争1300分) SATYBXH210515 2021/5/15 0:00:00 3-6人 ¥10800.00 在线咨询

制作:每每

旗舰校区:裕德路126号 乘车路线:地铁1、4号线上海体育馆、3号线9号线宜山路站、11号线上海游泳馆站

电话:4008-125-888 传真:+021-61208858

版权所有:新航道(北京)管理有咨询有限公司 沪ICP备11042568号-1

Document
无标题文档

TOP