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雅思写作task2范文及解析(关于TV channels的主题)
2016年09月14日 19:40 供稿单位: 责编:admin
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9月3日雅思写作大作文的主题是关于电视频道的论述,具体题目为:

Some people think having more TV channels is good because they will have more choices. While other people think too many TV channels only lead to a lot of poor quality TV programs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

雅思写作7分范文

新航道名师解析:电视频道多,是好事还是坏事?有人说,电视频道多当然好,我们就有了更多选择;另外有人却说,频道多了,有选择困难,更重要的是会出现很多粗制滥造的频道节目,浪费我们的时间。就这个题目,我相信99%的学生都会倾向于赞同前一个观点:毕竟,拥有选择的权利是最重要的,当世界上只剩下一个最牛逼、节目最上乘的电视频道时,你就知道频道多点就是真好啊!对此,唐老师可谓感同身受。唐老师小的时候不知为什么特别喜欢吃糖果,但那时糖果品种很有限,于是不停地吃同一种糖果,以至于后来见到那种糖果就想吐(throw up; feel sick) !这个题目可能对那些00后有些难度,因为他们长期泡在网络中,可能会问:电视频道是什么?对于这种too young, too naive的新新人类,唐老师只能表示无语了。

那么好,本作文的思路大体应该是这样的:第一段,先引入话题,现在电视频道很多(如果有数据更好,据老雅了解,全球电视频道数量已经达到15000左右!),然后提出两类观点(语言不要与题目重复,要改写),最后给出自己的观点(比如,虽然电视频道过多会引起选择困难或者节目总体质量下降,但我还是喜欢拥有更多电视频道);第二段,电视频道多的好处之一(比如,在物质层面,当代社会知识分化,我们可以看不同类型的频道,每一个频道都会给我们提供不同的内容);第三段,电视频道多的好处之二(比如,在精神层面,我们拥有选择的自由,这比专制式的只有少数几个频道带给我们的满足感要多得多);第四段,结论段。 推而广之,在这种“一边倒”的论述结构中,烤鸭们的困难往往是找不到足够的理由来证明自己的观点。其实很简单,大家可以从三个方面去破解一个事物/话题:物质层面(包括收入、成本、身体、空间、个人等)、心理层面(包括情感、精神等)、社会层面(包括集体、社区、道德、法律等)。英文表达水平较低的烤鸭,可将注意力放在物质层面,而英文水平表达能力较强的,则既要考虑物质层面,也好考虑心理层面,甚至社会层面,这样写出来的作文才具有很好的层次感和逻辑感,也才能够最大限度地打动考官。

9月3日雅思写作7分范文

With the development of digital technology come the numerous TV channels that have mushroomed into our life. Statistics show globally there are more than 15,000 different TV channels, and in China alone, the number is 1300! Many people do not like this development, suspecting the rapid increase of channel number will only lead to mediocrity in quality. While this suspicion may contain a grain of truth, I still believe in more channels mainly for two reasons.

Obviously, more channels provide TV viewers with more opportunities to enjoy their own favorite programmes. As far as I know, some TV viewers are more interested than others in educational programmes which give them knowledge in specialised fields. At the same time, there are some viewers who would like to be entertained and others who would watch TV as a window to the outside world. To cater to the tastes of different viewers, it is important that we have various channels, such as news, music, movies, sports and travel, among others. Undoubtedly, when more and more channels spring up, there may be some poor quality channels, but with many channels competing for viewers, chances are that we can enjoy programmes of higher quality.

More importantly, more channels give viewers the freedom of choice. When offered a great variety of TV channels, one sitting in front of TV may have some difficulty deciding what to watch, yet this feeling is more a “sweet” bitterness, just like what we experience when we go into a supermarket and are at a loss about our choices. If you do not think much of this freedom, just try to imagine what you would feel when you could only watch one channel and one programme, even if it were the best one in the world!

To conclude, more channels can give TV viewers more opportunities and freedom of choice, which are far more important than anything else, including the possible drop of quality of some TV programmes.

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