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  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: During big events, such as weddings or graduations, some people choose to record many videos and take numerous pictures on their smartphones, while others decide to record few or no videos and take few or no pictures. Which choice or decision do you prefer and why?

  There is no doubt that every body wants to cherish their great moments in one way or another. However,personally speaking,I do not think shooting videos or taking pictures using one's smartphone is a good idea in those invaluable moments.

  本段解析∶

  开头段言简意赅.背景指出议题的初衷后.直接表态。

  cherish v.珍惜.怀念

  invaluable adj.极其宝贵的

  Primarily, using smartphone to record in big events can be so distracting that it hinders people from really enjoying it. When you are busy with their smartphones, how is it possible for them to notice and enjoy their felings in the moment? Could you ever imagine a couple in the middle of their wedding, holding up their smartphones and shooting video for themselves? Even if you are not the star of the event, it is not appropriate, either. We have all been through the situations-say, a rock concert or a road show-where the audience in front are holding up their phones, which totally blocks the view of those in the back. Could they really enjoy the event? Neither. People in front may just want to post some pictures in their Facebook, and never take a look at the video but constantly check their likes and comments, while those in the back could see nothing but an ocean of screens in the air.

  本段解析

  本段从主角和观众两个角度，举婚礼和演唱会的例子.来说明在重要事件中。用手机录像或拍照会非常影响人们珍惜当下的重要时刻。

  hinder v.妨碍

  post v.发《朋友圈，动态等)

  likes and comments 点赞和评论

  an ocean of 大片的.大量的

  Furthermore, for the purpose of recording meaningful big events, there are more suitable approaches other than using one's smartphone.For instance, hiring some professional photographers is for sure a better choice.Their profession would allow them to capture the most memorable moments in the most desirable way. Besides, based on their experience of fm edina, they are also ready to judge whether they have collected what they would need in the following steps. By contrast, for us who are not adept at photography, there is always a great risk that we do not have enough usable materials when we want to integrate the video clips on our phone into a comprehensible story.

  本段解析：

  提出更好的方法.对比论证说明为什么专业的摄影师会比自己拿手机拍摄更适合。

  for sure 毫无疑问

  flm editing视频剪辑

  adept adj.擅长的

  integrate v.整合

  To be brief,using one's own cellphone to take photos or shoot videos in big events does not mulkegood ssnse to me,for it not only distracts me from living in the moment. but also does not rival other solutions, such as recruiting some professionals in this field.

  本段解析：

  结尾段再次表态，并概括、呼应分论点。

  to be brief 简而言之

  make good sense 说得通.理由充分

  rival v.比得上.能与.相匹敌