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10月12日下午场托福独立写作范文及解析-那些"偷来"的时间,应该做什么

2019/10/29 15:23:36来源:新航道作者:新航道

摘要:为了帮助各位备考托福同学们更好的熟悉最新托福写作题目内容,今天,上海新航道托福培训小编给大家带来了关于10月12日下午场托福独立写作范文及解析-那些"偷来"的时间,应该做什么。希望帮助考生对照文本更好的研究真题,充分备考,争取理想成绩,实现留学梦想。

  为了帮助各位备考托福同学们更好的熟悉最新托福写作题目内容,今天,上海新航道托福培训小编给大家带来了关于10月12日下午场托福独立写作范文及解析-那些"偷来"的时间,应该做什么。希望帮助考生对照文本更好的研究真题,充分备考,争取理想成绩,实现留学梦想。


  2019.10.12(下午) 独立写作题目

  Which of the following do you think students should do during their free time of the night?

  1、Do work through which they gain work experience, such as a part-time job or volunteering;

  2、Learn sporting skills;

  3、Learn to play a musical instrument


 写作范文:

  审题时注意:如果把想法集中在选项上,思路会局限。相反,要充分利用问题部分的情景设置:the night

  【本文立场:选3】


  Introduction

 略

  Body

  全篇的论证结构:同时否定选项1和2成为独立的一个段落。

  首先针对选项1让步。→ Earning an income may be the immediate consideration among the students who choose to do part-time jobs. Meanwhile, a volunteering job, although it does not pay, helps students to gain work experience and to build a social network. 接下来的考虑是:接着写对于选项2的让步,还是先用转折把选项1否定掉。最好是赶紧转着否定,否则的话,让步内容会冗长。→ However, work, paid or unpaid, is exhausting. 接下来顺延着把选项1和2共同的劣势说完。→ In fact, it is the same case with learning sporting skills. Although sports strengthen our body, they consume energy, which should be saved for the next day’s study. 然后,分别否定选项1和2。→In addition, many jobs are available off campus, and when they finish at the late night, students have to travel distances during the night, and their safety and security is uncertain. 接下来讨论sports的时候,可以和jobs建立逻辑关系,避免流水账一样的讨论。→ Although students do not have to leave the campus to learn sports, many sports require daylight, or proper weather or facilities that are unavailable during the night. 反驳时,也可以举例(举例不是仅仅可用于立论)。→ For instance, playing tennis is impossible unless there is good lighting and a good weather, and seldom can a person swim in an outdoor pool in the freezing temperature.

  全篇的论证结构:另外一个单独的段落讨论选项3:对比与选项1和2的优势,以及自己的益处。

  Unlike doing a job, particularly a job for money, and doing sports, playing a musical instrument is easy, consuming less strength or energy. 通过逻辑链接,迅速引出关于益处的讨论。→ In fact, it may be quite relaxing. 接下来举例论证可能是论证的最佳选择。→ Last semester, when I was learning piano, the melodious sounds were delightful, creating a lot of pleasure for the night, and every time, I woke up the next morning revitalized. 接下来讨论益处的第二点。略


  Conclusion

  略


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