2020/7/28 15:28:00来源:新航道作者:新航道
摘要:上海新航道托福培训小编特别整理了首场考试的详情,这次给大家带来了写的关于2020年7月18日托福独立写作范文及解析—差评可等……。希望帮助考生对照文本更好的研究真题,充分备考,争取理想成绩,实现留学梦想。
上海新航道托福培训小编特别整理了首场考试的详情,这次给大家带来了写的关于2020年7月18日托福独立写作范文及解析—差评可等……。希望帮助考生对照文本更好的研究真题,充分备考,争取理想成绩,实现留学梦想。
7月18日(1/2)托福独立写作
这题又考?!
7月18日重现2019年12月1日题!
题目:
When we give feedback about work of our classmates or coworkers,which one of the following should we give first?
-the positive feedback
-the negative feedback.
Introduction
Commonly,positive feedback is more acceptable when we comment on our peers' work.Meanwhile,we do not make only favorable comments,and,where necessary,are not unlikely to give unfavorable feedback.However,things are not that simple,and there is a conundrum.
Body Para.1
We may point out the limitations first because this may be efficient communication. There is no beating around the bush, and although this may be upsetting, there is always a chance for the compensation as the positive feedback will be given after. Unfortunately, many of my coworkers, when they are not recognized for the merits of their performance in the first place, respond unfavorably to the criticism about their work. In such situations, they cannot wait patiently for the praise we think we can give later to reverse their mood, and may be too crushed to listen. The lesson is that we should go the other way around. As a matter of fact, this is not only to avoid the “devastating” embarrassment but also to avoid the possible resistance to the criticism.
Body Para.2
There are also instances in which critical feedback should be given before acclaim. If a job is indeed poorly done, we are advised to be blunt and to cut to the chase quickly, for the consideration that our kind gesture, that we give a compliment first, may be misinterpreted as the whole idea of the evaluation, and for another consideration that the gesture may be seen as a fake display of our true thoughts and thus may be more embarrassing and hurting than the straightforward criticism.
Body Para.3
行文至此,题目中给出两个选择势均力敌,处在平衡状态。这时候,我们再写一个段落给我们心里的那个选项加码,就把我们的立场明确了。比如,我会讨论:Saying something nice about our peers’ performance is to open their hearts and prepare their emotions for the criticism. 具体的展开,大家自己试试?
Conclusion
At this point, we have found the way out of the dilemma.
解读:
浮光掠影
一语定论。
请加COCO老师(微信号:shnc_2018)
百人留学备考群,名师答疑,助教监督,分享最新资讯,领取独家资料。扫码免费加入
免费获取资料
热门搜索: 上海托福培训机构哪个好| 上海托福封闭班| 上海托福培训| 托福TPO1-74下载| 上海托福住宿班|
免责声明
1、如转载本网原创文章,情表明出处
2、本网转载媒体稿件旨在传播更多有益信息,并不代表同意该观点,本网不承担稿件侵权行为的连带责任;
3、在本网博客/论坛发表言论者,文责自负。
制作:每每