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2020年7月11日托福独立写作范文及解析②—你的新朋友“拍了拍”你

2020/7/17 14:14:52来源:新航道作者:新航道

摘要:因疫情影响,托福考试取消了几个月的考试,终于迎来首次考试,上海新航道托福培训小编特别整理了首场考试的详情,这次给大家带来了写的关于2020年7月11日托福独立写作范文及解析②—你的新朋友“拍了拍”你。希望帮助考生对照文本更好的研究真题,充分备考,争取理想成绩,实现留学梦想。

  因疫情影响,托福考试取消了几个月的考试,终于迎来首次考试,上海新航道托福培训小编特别整理了首场考试的详情,这次给大家带来了写的关于2020年7月11日托福独立写作范文及解析②—你的新朋友“拍了拍”你。希望帮助考生对照文本更好的研究真题,充分备考,争取理想成绩,实现留学梦想。


  托福复考,头两场利好

  重复了2019年12月7日以及10月13日的考题呢!!

  我们现在看到的是2/2场(重复了2019年10月13日)的考题:

  Which of the following ways do you think is better for a student who wants to make new friends?

  1、joining a sport team;

  2、participating in volunteering activities in a community

  3、traveling


  Introduction

 本文重点分析主体段

  开头节奏就要短小精悍,以便信息进展快速

  Nothing can be compared with the joy when making new friends, especially for teenagers. Though ways are various, the best one is no doubt participating in a sport team.


  Body

  审题时抓住重点

  下笔时各个击破

  The work-like structure in charitable activities prevents the likelihood of a friendship. Even in a voluntary job, in which the work do not pay, participants’ roles vary by positions, and there may be conflict of interest. Some of them are in the leadership role while others are the subordinates. It is hardly unlikely that people make new friends across the divisions, because the hierarchical structure forces them to isolate with each other. Moreover, even between the same level, hardly can the relationship be formed as the job may conflict, which is common in workplace.

 解读

  以上只对选项2进行了攻击。

  需要注意的是在攻击对方的时候,找到漏洞的同时进行了递进写法,把2的所有状况涵盖到以形成完全反驳。

  Instead, a sport team in school usually consists of amateur players. All the team members are much more likely to play for fun and recreation due to the same hobby. It is this point that differs from the volunteering job in community. Also, not only does the team have any potential conflict in work-like activities, players are also equal individuals, which facilitates the friendship due to the lack of hierarchy. I have once participated in a basketball team…举例部分略


 解读

  与上一段信息形成对比从而避免信息过度堆叠

  这个段落是以经典的讲道理后举例子的方式展开。从而扩充选择1的充实度

  That sport team members meet regularly is another merit, compared with that travelers meet by coincidence, and hardly can people make friends if they rarely meet. The previous travelling did help me make several friends and we even added each other on Facebook. however, when we went home back to normal like, they have been the silent ones in my contacts or sometimes commented on my updates, which is no way for further communication. The opposite case is my friends in basketball team, because we train and play together every Tuesday and the weekly meeting let us know each other better and want to become besties.

  解读

  接着比较选项3和选项1

  避免重复之上的内容,因此本段进行压缩,同时在写法上给出两个内容的绝对区别进行比较


Conclusion

  * 本文结尾省略

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