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  7月25日托福独立写作范文解析：

  现在我们看到的是上周的托福写作，重复了2017年12月9日考题

  Which one do you think is the most important for high school teacher (age from 15 to18)?

  1.the ability to give students advice to plan for their future;

  2.the ability to find which students need help and provide them with help;

  3.the ability to encourage students to learn on themselves outside of the classroom;

  先破题再写作

  核心是挑选中意项

  选完再去驳斥剩余项

  Introduction

  宜用背景信息切入话题

  忌延伸太过而跑题

  From kindergarten to university, the most important person that influences us is, to great extent, the teacher. They are those who help babies to form the initial impression of the world, they are those who give teenagers the overview of the society and they are those who prepare young adults well for the future life. Among them, I regard high school teachers as the one matters most and their job should be attached to students’ current study and learning.

  解读

  既然有话可写就放心大胆写

  在大话题下强化关键词教师，用排比句带出这一职业的重要性

  Body

  宜抓住关键信息展开

  忌不看题目胡乱说理

  First of all, examination pressure was the priority for high school students. High school students are all at an important stage in which they have nothing to worry about but how to enter a prestigious university. The prerequisite of that must be the outstanding academic performance, which requires deep learning day and night. If they failed in exam courses, not only would they be unable to get the college offer, they also lose the chance for a better future. To meet the end, teachers at high school are those they would turn to once being impeded in learning.

  When my friend was in high school, the knowledge of advanced mathematics imparted in textbook was so hard that he could barely comprehend. Having no one for help, he was extremely frustrated at that time until his math teacher noticed his difficulty. After that, the clear instruction from teacher, big or small facilitated him to be the top one who even got the offer from math major. Under this circumstance, hardly can one deny the significance of teachers in assisting study.

  解读

  通过说理强化高中生这一主题词把学习和老师的关系铺陈出来

  干巴巴的说理明显太过枯燥，随后附上例子增添论述感

  Body

  宜转向去驳斥不选项

  忌啰啰嗦嗦重复说理

  Also, the reason why the other two options are excluded is because they both have better replacement instead of being carried out by teachers. Although the previous work experience ensures the possibility for the consultation about future plan, teacher is not the most suitable person, as the whole plan should contain several aspects more than only academia. Therefore, parents knowing children better or professional career counseling sounds more reasonable. Similarly, some may ascribe high school educators cultivate children's initiative in learning both inside and outside class. Nevertheless, what they get wrong is that the former does rely on teachers'effort but the latter depends more even whole on students’ self-discipline. None of students who can learn independently even actively are educated or encouraged by teachers'words.

  解读

  不选项如有共同缺点就可以一起驳斥

  运用同一种让步但是搭配不同反驳方式

  ending

  宜回应主题重申观点

  忌拖泥带水不果断

  All in all, high school teachers may play the role in three divisions, but assisting student’s work should be the most suitable and the most important job of them.

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